Just wrote this yesterday and recorded it today, and what more can I say. (grin Anyway, I stand behind this statement 100% I even try to live up to it.
The anthemic chorus contrasts the intimacy of the vocal
As a courtesy to listener expectations, a little 4 bar intro would improve the attention transition.
Also at the end, the accompaniment of the chorus allowing the emotional resonance to linger? Unless you intend the dramatic cutoff as the desired effect? Leaving us?
Another nice one.
Moving brother, moving!
The anthemic chorus contrasts the intimacy of the vocal
As a courtesy to listener expectations, a little 4 bar intro would improve the attention transition.
Also at the end, the accompaniment of the chorus allowing the emotional resonance to linger? Unless you intend the dramatic cutoff as the desired effect? Leaving us?